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PostSubject: Goodbye, my mother..   Sun Mar 11, 2007 11:33 am

Looking through this clear window
Crying as always in this cold winter
Feeling guilty I regret this ..
That I loved my mother more than a hug and a kiss
Dying from inside, I watched that scene
I am sad that I loved my mother, I can't beleive
The scene was for a mother and her son
Playing with each other, with lots of fun
I remmembered back when I was a child
Sleeping beside you and our hearts were side by side

I wake up in the morning looking around
Can't recognize anyone with their different sounds
Except my lonely brother, with face to the ground
That kind little kid, you left all of a sudden
Missed your voice, missed your touch
I really missed your lovely hug so much
These worse days are passing slowly
Without you my mother I feel lonely

Saying goodbye is never easy
It's the hardest thing to do
But what hurts even more
That I didn't have the chance to say it to you
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An empty house, an empty chair
A mothers love, no longer there
A broken heart tears filled my eye
Another soul to fill the sky
Many memories in my mind
Never I do laugh, but always I cry
In these lonely days I am never calm
Things that I miss when I think about you mom
Missing your laugh, I will never again hear
This is reality that fills me with so much fear

No more smile on your face
No more warmth of your embrace
Life's with no taste without a mother
Even if you've got a father and a brother
God wanted back the angels he sent
So he took away the air you breathe
And gave you what was best
A place full of peace
A final place to rest


-This time I am not writing about myself, its about my mother (God, please, please rest her in peace)..
That was only a small part from the poem I wrote to her..
And if she is feeling me, I'd like to tell her that I will never forgive her, never forgive her for giving me so much love, that exceeded its limits, and by that so much love, she made me wanna follow her to death..Yes, I am fed up and I missed her soo much, so I am saying it loudly: I WANNA DIE..
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PostSubject: WOW!!   Sun Mar 11, 2007 2:54 pm

WOW Sherif, it's really great!!, it really shows that you can write poetry and show what's inside you, keep up the good work!!



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PostSubject: .....   Sun Mar 11, 2007 10:19 pm

gr8 poem ....

and of course she's with u and i dont she's gonna be happy listening to u saying u wanna die ... if u truely love her try to be the best in what u do ... pray for her and for urself , study hard and dont do anything that could upset her U KNOW WHAT I MEAN .
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PostSubject: Re: Goodbye, my mother..   Sun Mar 11, 2007 10:23 pm

sherif...bgd osama 3ando 7a2 fe kalamoo dah

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PostSubject: Re: Goodbye, my mother..   Mon Mar 12, 2007 7:54 pm

nice poem coming from the heart.keep it up
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PostSubject: Re: Goodbye, my mother..   Mon Mar 12, 2007 8:41 pm

OMIGOD!! Masha'Allah that poem is great, really more than words can say, more than words can describe....
You dunno how much it affected me!! You're a talented poet masha'Allah...
It actually brought a tear to my eye...

Thanks for posting this poem and for making us realize how important mothers are and how short life can be.

PS. I don't think it's a good idea to say :"I wanna die"... Life isn't that bad... Believe me there's still some hope left.. search 4 it n you'll definitely find it isA.
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PostSubject: gr8 poem   Mon Mar 12, 2007 10:10 pm

i luv ur poem ...... its beautiful ... i bet dat ur mother is now very proud of u 4writing such a poem ...... i jst wanna tell u look always at the bright side maybe allah did this 4 a gd reason which he keeps 4 u l8r .... keep on writing cuz ur words r deep 4m the heart
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PostSubject: Thank you ..   Mon Mar 12, 2007 10:15 pm

Thank you Ossama and Banhawy, Laila, and pretty in pink...

Life isn't bad to you all.. but it is so cruel to me..
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PostSubject: Re: Goodbye, my mother..   Tue Mar 13, 2007 12:44 am

sherif dont say life is cruel to u, god created u and he controls ur life and anything in the way is just a test -maybe a cruel test- but god does that to get u closer to him...thank god for his blessing and his curses and u'll find peace and happnies in ur heart..everyone is faced with a somekind of test think about women in war zones who lose their husbands and sons every day

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