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7agag

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PostSubject: when i looked into her eyes   Wed Mar 07, 2007 9:34 pm

When I looked into her face
Since I walked into dat place
She came calling from grace
And that feelin I can not replace
Her face was like a glowing sun
Shining brightly as it had neva done
It was like da moon shining at noon
Like da music following its tune
My heart thumped in my chest
I felt as if it would neva rest
And such amazing feeling I canít deny
Would go on for eva till da day I die
My soul took me along a step or two
Hoping I would make it through
With feeling that high
I had to try
Because just 1 look from her
Would make me fly
Her beautiful smile
I stared @ for a while till,
I crossed her deep blue eyes
And floated for a mile
They were wide as the ocean
Deep as the sea
Full of mystery and secrets
Which I couldnít see
Ö<3<3
ABD ELRAHMAN HAGGAG (S1E)
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Age : 26
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PostSubject: Re: when i looked into her eyes   Thu Mar 22, 2007 7:45 pm

7agoo!!! I never thought you wrote such amazing poetry!! I love it sooo much!! A very rich poem... Hope I wrote that good like you Sad I envy the one who will read this poem and to whom this is dedicated.
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PostSubject: THXX   Sat Mar 24, 2007 4:21 pm

well 5adija thx so much 4 ur comment and i dedecated 2 someone i think she knowzz herself......and thxx again 4 ur opinion w 2b2y b2a 2oly lba2y el nas y2olo ra2yohom...byeeeeeeeeeezzzzzzz
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The key to hearts <3

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PostSubject: Re: when i looked into her eyes   Sat Apr 07, 2007 12:46 am

hey abd elrahman! a really gr8 poem! keep up the good work and write more!

sawsan eid
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